Title:
The Mayor's Daughter III: Miller's End
Author:
Will Versuch
Publisher:
Pink Flamingo Publications, LLC
Genre:
BDSM/Contemporary
Publication
date: July 20, 2012
ISBN:
9781937831493
ASIN:
B008L4AEJ4
Length:
149 pages
Book
Series and number: The Mayor's Daughter III: Miller's End Book 3
Rating:
3 ½
Heat
Rating: Scorching
I
received a complimentary copy of this book from the authorin exchange
for a fair and honest review. I rated it 3.5 out of 5 stars.
Reviewed
for For Whom The Books Toll
3
1/2, Scorching
Will
Versuch, author of The Mayor’s Daughter: Draft Pony and The Mayor’s
Daughter 2: Stablemate has brought us the end of this thrilling
storyline. In the third and final installation of the Mayor's
Daughter trilogy, Jessica and Allison's struggle inside the Mill
continues. Both girls have known what it means to be a Draft Pony,
locked in leather and forced to toil under the control of their
owner. Life as a Draft Pony means little rest, strict bondage, and
cruel punishment for every infraction of the strict rules.
Jessica
has tasted life as a Show Pony and the improvements that it offers.
Allison, while serving as a Draft Pony herself, has seen how much
better the life of a Show Pony can be, and yearns to reach that
level. But there can be only one Show Pony, and the two girls must
compete to see who will earn it.
The arrival of Officer Kate
Morgan adds a new wrinkle to the workings of the Mill. But is she
there to free the girls and end their torment? Or is she just another
player in the Mill Owner's game?
The Miller's End will bring
Jessica Miller's story to a close. Will she end up as a trained pony
slave, sold to the highest bidder as the Mill Owner promised her?
Will she find freedom from the Mill? What will her fellow ponygirl
Allison’s fate be? And what about the Mayor’s involvement? Will
he face justice for his part in his daughter’s torment or will he
move on with his political career?
My
Review:
Jessica
is pitted against Allison for the position of show pony. Jessica is
determined to keep her position as show pony, it's still hard work
but at least she gets to sleep in a bed. Allison is just as
determined to beat Jessica and make her the draft pony again. Allison
hates being a draft pony, with little sleep, sexual torment, and
continuous labor. Both women are set to tasks they have little chance
of completing correctly which means they will be punished cruelly.
Jessica
believes their kidnapper favors the new girl, Allison believes he's
protecting his favorite, Jessica. So instead of being able to work
together and figure out a way of escaping, they are too busy
disliking each other and doing what they have to to each other to
survive.
When
police officer Kate Morgan arrives at the mill, the women are shocked
and relieved. The kidnapper turns the tables and distracts Kate and
she too becomes a prisoner at the mill. Their tormentor is still
playing head games with them and tells both Jessica and Allison
different stories about why or how Kate is at the mill. All through
their captivity, the kidnapper has filmed the girls during all their
training and humiliation. He is also continuing to take viewer
requests for new ways to torture his captives. Will Jessica,
Allison, and Kate be able to escape or will they have to endure more
sexual torment at their captor's hands?
The
Mayor's Daughter III: Miller's End by Will
Versuch is the last book in The
Mayor's Daughter trilogy. Both books II and III
start where the previous books ended so it's easy to follow the
story. I really liked that aspect of this trilogy. One of the other
things I liked is Mr.
Versuch's ability to write such descriptive scenes that
I could almost hear the rattle and clank of the chains, or the cries
of pain from Jessica and Allison.
I
applaud Jessica's ability to decide on a career if she ever escapes.
Plus, she's able to find ways to cope with each situation that I
would never have thought of.
Allison
was a trooper and endured far more than I would have been able to.
She was somewhat naive and was easily swayed by whatever the
kidnapper told her. But I probably would have done the same thing
because of not really knowing what to believe.
Kate
was a very strong character, and I really liked her, she was tough,
confident, unafraid and a take charge kind of girl. Even while being
tortured, she tried to reassure Jessica and Allison.
The
kidnapper is just as evil and diabolical in this third book as the
other two. He's methodical in his actions and very thorough in making
sure his victims aren't able to escape. He doesn't make mistakes. I
kept waiting for a mistake or miscalculation and was always hopeful
he would get what was coming to him.
Mr.
Versuch writes a fantastic story full of twists and
turns and emotions. And just when you think the ride is over, it
blasts off again for another round of surprises. As in book II, there
were many typos that distracted from the storyline.
I
think everyone has a secret fantasy or two, and a kidnap fantasy
might be one of them, but probably not in the scope that The
Mayor's Daughter trilogy is written.
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